Ann Gilmour Poet Free verse

Tears of Joy

besotted
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entranced
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perfect fingers
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tiny toes
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rosebud lips
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button nose
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a precious boy
in my arms
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joyous tears flow


Written 14th January 2021

Contest Name	20-word max - do it with feeling
Sponsor Line Gauthier
2nd PLACE

Contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE 43
Sponsor Brian Strand
10th Place

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Gordon Mcconnell January 23, 2021 at 1:10 PM Lovely piece Ann so nice and reasons for joy! Hope you're doing well and keeping safe, it's frosty but sunny up here in mornings. Blessings always, Gordon Ann Gilmour January 27, 2021 at 11:54 AM Thank you dear Gordon, so pleased you enjoyed it. I am struggling a little with this lockdown, as have been staying in as advised, but it is hard when you are on your own. But mostly I try to keep positive and hope that my vaccination will be soon. I hope you are both keeping safe and well my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2021 at 2:21 PM So sweet! Ann Gilmour January 27, 2021 at 11:49 AM Bless you Kim with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2021 at 10:08 AM so beautiful! Congrats for a great win Ann Gilmour January 27, 2021 at 11:48 AM Thank you so much Andrea I always appreciate your comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison January 16, 2021 at 12:56 PM such a touching piece Ann a cause for celebratory tears:-) hugs jan xx Ann Gilmour January 17, 2021 at 5:56 AM Thank you dear Jan, after writing it there were tears of course, but remembering my joy was good. Thank you my friend. With love and hugs Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar January 14, 2021 at 9:25 AM Can I share your joy. A ne born is always a day of celebration. ~~ Ann Gilmour January 14, 2021 at 10:06 AM Yes Victor you can share my joy, for everytime a child is born it is truly a miracle and we should all celebrate.. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit January 14, 2021 at 8:44 AM Both descriptive and emotive from start to finish. I see the beloved child in images you created, Ann. Ann Gilmour January 14, 2021 at 8:48 AM Thank you dear Vijay this was how I felt when my precious boy was born, though sadly now he has gone... With kindest thoughts Ann xx