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Written: August 06, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ One million years wept. The universe, in a symphony of tears, kept Sea of emotion, an unceasing tide Souls found comfort, and hearts found pride. In Eden, serpents lay in wait. Deception lures souls to seal their fate. Despite lies and shame, a shimmer of light Hope blazed brightly, dispelling the night. The dark days and misery were gone. I can prevail over everything I stumble upon. Deep in the ocean, secrets lie. And the night falls from the sky. Echoes of eternity span time and space. A triumphant melody of grace. After sorrow, fresh beginnings arise. A lovingly crafted tapestry with bright skies. Million-year-old tears are now pearls. Dealing with all who endured life's swirls As the waves crash on the shore. They reverberate love forevermore. Eden, where innocence thrived Through redemption, hope was revived. No longer are serpents, harbingers of shame. Forever love conquered gloom, we proclaim Love's timeless echoes and embrace We find comfort in this infinite space. In this ocean of emotions, tears have flown. A million years later, love has grown. Let us acclimate to the echoes of eternity. Fill our hearts with love's serenity. Time fades in this huge expanse. We'll find purpose in our trance. Eden, where it all began We will jointly overcome the snake's span. Love will help us pass any test. We are blessed in our eternal quest. So let's preserve tears and our senses flow. They convince us that our love will blow. This everlasting ocean of love's rivers is deep. Binding us forever, love is ours to keep.

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Date: 8/7/2023 5:49:00 AM
This everlasting ocean of love's rivers is deep. Binding us forever, love is ours to keep--a superb expression in honor of love. Write on my friend. Your muse rocks.
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Date: 8/6/2023 9:43:00 PM
Your poems always instil fresh hopes in us ! I don't know if all snakes have withdrawn from Eden now. But the tears that ran out of our eyes are dried and we live in a hope of redemption. "After sorrow, fresh beginnings arise. A lovingly crafted tapestry with bright skies." This great hymn on love soothes and comforts the hearts. Well done dear friend .
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Date: 8/6/2023 9:40:00 PM
Lovely Sotto, I especially love this line 'Eden, where innocence thrived Through redemption, hope was revived.'
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