Tears of Dew

Speaking of Dew 2-12-26 Sponsor Nette Onclaud Option #2 Tears of Dew (Jueju) 5 or 7 words per line
The mother tree sends out roots that produce "daughters" in a "fairy circle."  These "daughters" live on and produce more trees even when the "mother tree" is gone.
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Tears of Dew

redwood titans reach for coastal dewy teardrops
clear crystalline pearls decorate their feathery boughs
roots entwine saving dews for parched summers
mother tree lives through daughter's fairy circle
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Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 4:16 PM
Ahhh!! What an interesting tree about which you have written. I enjoyed reading this one today. I need to look up the redwood titans and see if it is what I think is a redwood tree. Thank you for sharing this work with us. Also, congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 11:06 PM
This is enchanting , Sam. Congratulations
Kauffman Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Learning more about redwoods was a mystical and "enchanting" experience. Hugs and blessings!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 5:17 PM
loved 'daughter's fairy circle' -- flowing and graceful words . A delight to read, dear Sam...hugs, Sara
Kauffman Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 4:21 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! I loved learning about the magical qualities of the redwood tree. This was a fun experience into the world Jueju! Hugs and blessings my friend!
George Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 3:52 AM
"roots entwine saving dews for parched summers" Dear Sam, you think in ways others don't think. The thoughts on dew have taken you to thoughts of the importance of saving something for future to be used during times of adversity. Great penning dear. All the Best.
Kauffman Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Dearest Valsa, thank you dear friend! Redwood trees are like a poem for me - ancient, majestic trees of wonder that only take what they need from the coastal mists and save for, as you so perfectly say, "times of adversity!" I always love your feedback and your visits! Hope you are doing well. Sending you blessings of joy!
Rodgers Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 4:38 PM
Dear Sam, You don’t rush the redwoods, you let them stand. “Redwood titans reach” has that slow, upward breath to it, like we’re tilting our heads back with you. What really stayed with me, though, is the last line. “mother tree lives through daughter’s fairy circle.” That’s where it deepens there something almost druidic yet grounded in the real biology of roots entwining, saving, sustaining. Keep listening to the trees, Sam. They seem to be talking to you. Winter Blessings, Sam, Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 11:44 AM
Dear Daniel, your wonderful message inspired me like the redwoods that we see all the time. Truly they are the gentle giants of grace giving life to the forest. There is almost a magic about the way they propagate, support each other, resist fire and live in a family. I am so glad you got the feeling of looking up into the heart of the tree! It is a mystical experience and listening to their voices in every season is unforgettable. Take care! Happy Valentine's Day. Blessings of winter warmth and joy.
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 4:22 PM
what a great interpretation of the theme Sam:-) fabulous imagery in every line xx
Kauffman Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Hi Jan! I am so grateful for your wonderful feedback. Thank you. Redwood trees are simply an amazing phenomenon of nature. Their grandeur is so inspirational. Happy Valentine's Day! Hugs and blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 1:56 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" We both did "TEARS OF DEW." Have a fun day writing away..........
Kauffman Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Paula! It's so interesting ho two different poets can write with such different emphasis on the same theme! Blessings to you!
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