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Tears of a Fallen Star

They could never understand What they have done to you You’re often criticized Of what you haven’t done Or talked about what you should have done In denial about what's happening Making since of nothing so you believe you a star When they cut you like a chicken With his head cut off A true story A beautiful opinionated moon In a relationship with a star A star that has risen from depths This star was lied to by another star A star who was envious of him He told him to go to Earth Pick roses and come back But the star forgot Once you leave no return Tears of fallen star… As he looks up and cries to his moon…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/21/2010 10:43:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Herbert. Love, Carol
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