Tears of a Fallen Star

They could never understand
What they have done to you
You’re often criticized
Of what you haven’t done
Or talked about what you should have done
In denial about what's happening
Making since of nothing so you believe you a star
When they cut you like a chicken
With his head cut off
A true story
A beautiful opinionated moon
In a relationship with a star
A star that has risen from depths
This star was lied to by another star
A star who was envious of him
He told him to go to Earth
Pick roses and come back
But the star forgot
Once you leave no return
Tears of fallen star…
As he looks up and cries to his moon…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 21, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Herbert. Love, Carol
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