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reading passages of mom’s ten-year old diary reliving complications of dad’s last surgery trips to hospital her sleepless nights her tears saved for crying in the rain more rain forecast tonight Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CENSORED~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 2, 2019 in its earlier format for contest ENGLISH QUINTAIN sponsored by JANICE CANERDY

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Date: 8/4/2019 6:05:00 PM
The ending shows the optimism and hope in the family, which makes these memories ever so poignant.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/3/2019 12:46:00 PM
Sad painful memories Line... we are looking to find the best place to give us a chance to see the Northern Lights next year!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Jan. Best wishes for a most worthwhile trip.
Date: 8/2/2019 10:04:00 PM
Good last two lines! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/2/2019 11:23:00 PM
Thank you, Matthew. Much appreciated.

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