Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

Tears In the Moonlight-For Tim Smith

Tim. Your latest poems stirred the memory of this one I recently penned. 

I stumble down a street, cobbled with broken dreams,
hobbled by those memories chained around my heart.
Tears glisten as they're captured by silver moonbeams
tossed from Luna's fair hand as mine are gently caught.

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James Inman April 23, 2017 at 10:39 AM I hope you find the key to unlock those chains Lin. Lin Lane April 23, 2017 at 11:31 AM I found it a few years ago, James. This is one of those half finished poems that I finalized. Thank you for your kind comment.

Jan Allison April 14, 2017 at 11:46 AM Choc full of emotions Lin you really do have a golden pen my friend:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane April 14, 2017 at 1:13 PM You are my number 1 cheerleader, Jan. I smile at your kind words and I'm encouraged to write.

Tim Smith April 14, 2017 at 9:58 AM A beautiful poem Lin...even when we stumble someone will be there to catch our tears...thanks for thinking of me. Lin Lane April 14, 2017 at 1:12 PM We've both suffered emotional pain, Tim. I'm reminded of my own when I read you. I thank you for having the courage to write of your loss. It makes it easier to share my own.

Chris Green April 14, 2017 at 9:46 AM This was beautiful and a little sad Lin. It also created a magical feeling. Nicely done. Lin Lane April 14, 2017 at 1:07 PM Memories are often painful, Chris. A reflection of my mood, and I think of the one that Tim was in. Thank you for liking this one.