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Tears In the Mist

tombstones loom in the mist of the churchyard's eerie glow, feelings of sadness will persist as memories come and go, in the misty silence, tears will flow 1-1-2020 Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 2/11/2020 8:06:00 PM
Great imagery, may tears never flow from thine eyes, well done Joseph
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Date: 1/19/2020 8:24:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt with this deep and emotional Quintain _Constance
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:21:00 PM
- A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/11/2020 4:31:00 AM
Wow Joseph, this is so moving and well written! I see why it was awarded First Place. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2020 3:00:00 PM
so much said in just 5 short lines, but only you can pull that off. Amazing poem dear Joseph, Happy New Year x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/10/2020 3:00:00 PM
a very well deserved win, my friend. Congratulations
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:12:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Date: 1/4/2020 8:10:00 AM
Sad but beautiful poetry my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/3/2020 9:54:00 PM
"as memories come and go" Indeed they do. Your words tug at my heart. This is moving and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/2/2020 6:27:00 PM
melancholy poetry at its most beautiful, good luck in the contest I think Constance will love this one:-) Happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Jan, Happy New Year..
Date: 1/1/2020 1:30:00 PM
I feel the somber tone--lovely write, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/3/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..

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