Joseph May Poet Quintain (English)

Tears In the Mist

tombstones loom in the mist
 of the churchyard's eerie glow,
 feelings of sadness will persist
 as memories come and go,
 in the misty silence, tears will flow

 1-1-2020
 Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery Contest
 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Mystic Rose Rose February 11, 2020 at 8:06 PM Great imagery, may tears never flow from thine eyes, well done Joseph

Constance La France January 19, 2020 at 8:24 AM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt with this deep and emotional Quintain _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:21 PM - A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 4:31 AM Wow Joseph, this is so moving and well written! I see why it was awarded First Place. Congratulations! xxoo

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2020 at 3:00 PM a very well deserved win, my friend. Congratulations

Beautiful Scars January 10, 2020 at 3:00 PM so much said in just 5 short lines, but only you can pull that off. Amazing poem dear Joseph, Happy New Year x:-)-luloo

Funom Makama January 10, 2020 at 11:12 AM Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

Jennifer Proxenos January 4, 2020 at 8:10 AM Sad but beautiful poetry my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole January 3, 2020 at 9:54 PM "as memories come and go" Indeed they do. Your words tug at my heart. This is moving and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy

Jan Allison January 2, 2020 at 6:27 PM melancholy poetry at its most beautiful, good luck in the contest I think Constance will love this one:-) Happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx Joseph May January 3, 2020 at 7:04 AM Thank you Jan, Happy New Year..

Vijay Pandit January 1, 2020 at 1:30 PM I feel the somber tone--lovely write, Joseph. Joseph May January 3, 2020 at 7:03 AM Thank you Vijay..