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Tears Fell On Ebb Tide

The hungry mouth of misery swallowed me. In sorrow I walked the edge of a cerulean sea. Along its shoreline, my wistful eyes have wept. Tears fell on ebb tide, and away they were swept. Once my heart held deep within, a joyous glow, then plunged into darkness, a sad tale of woe. I felt it beating, waiting to discover love anew, and a world freshly painted lucent sapphire blue. I've lain upon the beach never wanting to arise, watching clouds swiftly flying in clear azure skies and praised God for creating such a realm of blue, so radiantly glorious in shades of a Heavenly hue. If I could label a color that expresses my emotion it would be a darkling one called, 'Lost Devotion.' It's terribly heartbreaking when romance expires. Doused were the passionate flames of love's fires. When at last I've passed, my salty tears will flow from clear azure skies to the cerulean sea below. Moonlight will paint shadows from her indigo skies, until tears no longer spill from my weeping eyes.

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Date: 11/12/2021 5:15:00 AM
This is a beautiful write, Jenna ! The cerulean sea here stands as a metaphor for life with its whirls and swirls mingled with times of quiet and peace 'It's heartbreaking when romance expires. Doused were passion's flames of love's fires.'.... These two lines set the whole mood of the poem.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/12/2021 5:21:00 AM
Hi, Valsa. I am so happy your enjoyed reading my poem, and even happier that your comments are so detailed. Thank you so much.
Date: 11/8/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hi Jenna, I’m back to read your awesome poem again. I’m stunned it was N/A’d and I would have placed it first..absolutely!! This is going in my faves! You are a talented poet, God bless! :)
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Date: 11/8/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for a second read, Laura. I'm very grateful for your support and compliments. You are the third person to message me with the same thoughts about the outcome of the contest in which this poem was entered. I really do appreciate that kind of encouragement. Many thanks.
Date: 11/8/2021 4:29:00 AM
Wow just looking over the comments Jenna, Masterpiece, Pure magic, Faves, Trophy winner, Staggering, and Stunning, really doesn't take a mystic to see what happened here, or does it, cheers David
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Date: 11/8/2021 6:28:00 AM
I suppose it can be chalked up to several things, none of them unbiased. I've read many poems from wonderful poets that were discarded into the N/A pile, while far less worthy entries were awarded placements. I'm going to ignore many contests from now on, citing incompetence or favoritism as the culprit used by some judges. A real farce and an insult to those better writers.
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Date: 11/8/2021 5:34:00 AM
I really don't get it Jenna, if anyone out there would like to enlighten me as to why this poem got an N/A I'd love to hear it, as these contest issues really need to be addressed,
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2021 5:22:00 AM
I’m glad your eyes see what many don’t, refuse to see or choose to overlook where contest judging is concerned. It really is disheartening to enter such contests. No bouquet of roses from that judge or for her. Thank you for being so supportive, David.
Date: 11/7/2021 7:05:00 PM
A romantic masterpiece…blue in all its sadness
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2021 12:42:00 AM
I am so glad you like this one, Kim. Glad to see you back and hope you and your family are doing ok. Hugs.
Date: 11/7/2021 6:32:00 PM
Goodness! This is wonderful! To mine faves as Ruben used to say!
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Date: 11/8/2021 12:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, James.
Date: 11/5/2021 4:57:00 PM
Pure Magic Jenna! You create so beautifully…..very talented! Debx
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Date: 11/7/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you but it didn’t appeal to the contest host. Too bad.
Date: 11/5/2021 1:29:00 PM
So beautiful Jenna, lovely hues of blue you’ve written. I agree with Tom, this is a masterpiece. Best wishes, Belle
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Date: 11/7/2021 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Belle. It was not a winner in the eyes of the host but I’m happy it was received so well by my friends.
Date: 11/5/2021 12:48:00 PM
So pensive Jenna. Such a melancholy journey into the depths of blue with your tears being swept away with and "ebb" tide mingled forever with the ocean. Lovely images. Best wishes and blessings for the contest!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/7/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam.
Date: 11/4/2021 5:49:00 PM
This is gorgeous verse, Jenna! Such a stunning poem, so emotive and filled with beautiful imagery! Should do very well in the contest..enjoyed! :) ps. A Fave!
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Date: 11/7/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. It was N/A’d
Date: 11/4/2021 2:04:00 PM
A poets poem Jenna, imagery and wording is staggering, your writing is in top gear at the moment, a colour called lost devotion, where'd you find the words, sad and uplifting at the same time, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/4/2021 4:28:00 PM
Your comments are awesomely delicious, David. I can’t answer your query about where some of my wording comes from. It just pops up. Lol. Thanks for your awesome comments
Date: 11/4/2021 12:32:00 PM
So very beautiful Jena …. A fav for me to read over and over . A beautiful journey into your heart and soul. Sad and deep and dreamy. So many favorite lines to revisit . Good luck in the contest . Hugs, Susan :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/4/2021 12:36:00 PM
I am so delighted with your thoughts, Susan. How nice to know that you liked these lines well enough to revisit. A wonderful compliment, and I thank you.
Date: 11/4/2021 12:09:00 PM
Jenna, this is a trophy winner if I ever read one! Beautiful lines with exquisite rhymes. Love it. I think this P.O.T.D. bound, too.
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Date: 11/4/2021 12:35:00 PM
I appreciate your encouraging thoughts, Milt, but I don't count on anything when it comes to contest placements any more. I'm just pleased that you like it well enough to think so. It's not my time for a potd so soon. Ya know...PS has it's way of choosing them monthly, or whenever.
Date: 11/4/2021 9:21:00 AM
A masterpiece of a poem Jenna, so well written with striking imagery on the theme of blue. Good luck in the contest, hope you've had a good day. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/4/2021 12:32:00 PM
I am thrilled that you saw in my lines, what I envisioned them to portray. Thank you so very much for 'getting me.' Tom.

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