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Tears Do Fall

Tears do Fall ...a sad sonnet... My tears do fall as they cowardly crawl To rivers of disbelief with banks of grief My heart a slaving stall building the wall The love I seek near windows bane belief In distant dormant dwells my heart repels Admits the darkness hides my tearful tides Loves empty wells with superstitious spells Where sorrow divides the banished brides For a silence slaved stands a soul depraved In a desolate domain where demons deign A captive caved within a mind that’s mazed Of a vaulted vain amongst a drowning drain Will the tears bathe my final grassy grave? As they nail and engrave will my spirit save? May.18.2018 NO 440 ANY FORM, ANY THEME UP TO MAX OF 20 LINES Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/6/2018 12:36:00 PM
hello Wined Warrior, A beautiful poem with emotion and sadness. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/22/2018 11:16:00 PM
Hey winged warrior I found this poem full of tragic and emotional elements so I've created a voice memo out of your poem. I want to post it somewhere so I'm just seeking for your permission... Also give me your email so that i can send it to you. Also give me a feedback if you liked it. I'm hoping to get a reply from your side. Email me - sati.nikhil@rediffmail.com
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:26:00 AM
You project grief and sadness with a capable pen, WW. May those tears serve as a healing balm! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:20:00 PM
Superb writing my friend. A sonnet that brings pleasure to read and contemplate. Closing verses golden.. A fav....
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Date: 5/19/2018 6:30:00 AM
Tears do fall ..a sad but well crafted discourse of emotions..best for a win, WW.
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Date: 5/19/2018 1:14:00 AM
Sad, abundant tears wrapped in an amazing graceful Sonnet! Unique imagery, expressive wording.. When the feeling of ache and pain turns into tears betraying our weakness and revealing our secret, our sole solace is reaching relief and getting healed.. A great pleasure reading your beauty. Stay bright and blessed Winged Warrior.
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