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Tears Are a Waste

Tear's are a Waste

Tear's are a waste
and most often miss placed 
On there intended victim
Because there victim is you
There the accelerator to your glue
You see if they are not spent on a loved one
They are like broken cookie's at the bottom of the tin
That are destined to be thrown in the bin
I hope in the future,  no more tear's you do waste
On people they do not deserve to be placed

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/30/2010 11:05:00 PM good message, don't cry for people who do not deserve your sympathy. Well, I do not even look at those "numbers" Christopher. I think they are not giving us an accurate look at the real picture. Many times I will click on a poet's poem, again and again, becuase I forget if I saw it already. Each time we click on a poem and realize "oh, I already saw or commented" then that gets recorded as a "view" So that is why I don't take stock in those numbers, Thanks for telling me what you meant! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/30/2010 8:10:00 PM Couplet form Chris group in lines of two! Use a period at the end of each thought! Light 7 love Login to Reply

Te'Arra Callandret Date: 7/30/2010 6:48:00 PM Beautiful poem i love it its very deep and also so good. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/30/2010 4:58:00 PM awesome tears should not be intended for those not in need of it, enjoyed your write..P.D. Login to Reply