Hija De La Luna Poet Tanka

Tears

Tears

All days and all nights
I can hardly see the light 
Through my burning eyes.
Tears ooze like blood from fresh wound 
And tastes like bitter poison.

2/11/15
Hija de la Luna
For Rick Parise' Tanka Tears contest

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Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 8:54 PM A bitter sweet poem, well done!!

Kp Nunez February 25, 2015 at 10:32 AM Ah, my beautiful friend, who was crazy enough to have made you shed these tears? It seems it's me who have been remiss! I missed this one...I know you'll forgive me, crazy that I am. Like it though. Hugs and smiles from lovely me :D Hija De La Luna March 3, 2015 at 3:19 AM there always is forgiveness, crazy lovely Kim! and thank you for liking this one :)) love and light!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 20, 2015 at 7:14 AM Hi Hija...After a long time...How are you? Good poem. Liked it. God bless. I invite you to my page.Love Hija De La Luna February 20, 2015 at 7:44 AM Yep, Rajat, caught up with the world and all good so far with tinge of biting realities :) thank you for liking the poem! Will visit your page and hope you well