Tears

“Tears”


Slowly tiny drops 
Drip , Drip
Falling 
Down, Down
Those brownn eyes
Blink, Blink
Forever more
More
Your eyes will
Cry, Cry
And you heart will never 
Be 
Dry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shiells Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Hi Courtney, This was a powerful write. Speaking volumes. Great!:~) Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah
Thajudeen Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:28 AM
Nice.
Enriquez Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Dear Courtney: I have written a new work called "The Phoenix" which is for you. It is a sonnet and an acrostic poem as well. You can read the message in the first letter of each line downwards. Keep faith. All the best then. Leon
Enriquez Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Dear Courtney: Thank you for sending me that touching note. I will reply soon in a separate soup mail. Understand this, all pain and sorrow that a soul person encounters in this life is like waiting in the darkness for the dawn to come. And light will just blanket the darkness. I feel your pain in all your poems posted here. Write more. Write every day (if you can snatch a few minutes). Let your feelings out in your poetry, and you will heal from inside out wards. Leon. (see Note 2) No matter how you have been pained, you will emerge a better person. Visualize and expect love every moment. Fix your mind on love and nothing else. You must get what your mind and heart desire. That's the truth. And no matter what, you deserve love, and nothing less. I will pray for you. You are your own best friend, Courtney. Much love. Leon
Enriquez Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Desr Courtney: (Note2) ... No matter how you have been pained, you will emerge a better person. Visualize and expect love every moment. Fix your mind on love and nothing else. You must get what your mind and heart desire. That's the truth. And no matter what, you deserve love, and nothing less. I will pray for you. You are your own best friend, Courtney. Much love. Leon
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 11:45 AM
beautiful tender words - (you need to remove the extra n from brown) Hugs Jan xx
Curtis Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Well Done !
Thajudeen Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Touching the heart slowly,slowly! A fine work.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 2:01 PM
- Hello dear Courtney - Tears are words the heart can not say - do not cry :) - Moving poem, well done :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kiggin Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 7:09 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0uNLw3pXlVM&feature=share&list=PLGctnbrODUmL_Mq8FhfBwannq5NBhJrzG&index=63
Kiggin Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 4:38 AM
Chopin, raindrops please listen.
Toil Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Hi Courtney. Time heals all wounds. Lovely poem ....Sam
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