Tears

“Tears” Slowly tiny drops Drip , Drip Falling Down, Down Those brownn eyes Blink, Blink Forever more More Your eyes will Cry, Cry And you heart will never Be Dry.

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/5/2014 11:26:00 AM

Hi Courtney, This was a powerful write. Speaking volumes. Great!:~) Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/3/2014 3:28:00 AM

Nice.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 4/26/2014 12:12:00 AM

Dear Courtney: I have written a new work called "The Phoenix" which is for you. It is a sonnet and an acrostic poem as well. You can read the message in the first letter of each line downwards. Keep faith. All the best then. Leon

Leon Enriquez

Date: 4/25/2014 8:40:00 PM

Dear Courtney: Thank you for sending me that touching note. I will reply soon in a separate soup mail. Understand this, all pain and sorrow that a soul person encounters in this life is like waiting in the darkness for the dawn to come. And light will just blanket the darkness. I feel your pain in all your poems posted here. Write more. Write every day (if you can snatch a few minutes). Let your feelings out in your poetry, and you will heal from inside out wards. Leon. (see Note 2) No matter how you have been pained, you will emerge a better person. Visualize and expect love every moment. Fix your mind on love and nothing else. You must get what your mind and heart desire. That's the truth. And no matter what, you deserve love, and nothing less. I will pray for you. You are your own best friend, Courtney. Much love. Leon

Leon Enriquez
Date: 4/25/2014 8:41:00 PM

Desr Courtney: (Note2) ... No matter how you have been pained, you will emerge a better person. Visualize and expect love every moment. Fix your mind on love and nothing else. You must get what your mind and heart desire. That's the truth. And no matter what, you deserve love, and nothing less. I will pray for you. You are your own best friend, Courtney. Much love. Leon