Tears

Tears blind us Bind us Make us do things Things that sin Crawling down our skin Tears that burn But we'll never learn

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Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 11:05:00 AM

Savannah, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Vanna Strano
Date: 6/9/2013 4:34:00 PM

thank you<3 and I will !! LOVE vanna