Tears

an ocean of tears
drowns my brokenhearted soul
floating on despair
the wings of love fly away
my wistful heart seeks solace


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Joseph xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Very nicely done and won!! congratulations!
Liwayway Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Joseph.. like it :)
Brown Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Joseph. Love, Carol XXXX
Rozario Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Awesome Joseph...many congrats on your win!!!
Susan Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 7:22 AM
aww... congrats on your win with this sad piece!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 4:20 PM
CONGRATS JOSEPH FOR A BIG WIN WITH THIS EMOTIONAL TANKA LUV ..
Roberts Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 2:42 PM
beautifully penned, congrats on your win in the contest
A   Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Joseph, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
Lock Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Lovely Joseph! JL
Wesley Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Nurse fuzzy here to comfort you! When you reach bottom there's nowhere to go but up so don't give up hope.
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:02 PM
STill waiting on a new poem, my friend!! Happy WEdnesday!
Brown Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Joseph. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Hi Joseph, this is very profound, and so sad... very well written....
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:01 AM
An emotive work..Sorry that you are brokenhearted..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 1:25 PM
A sad but beautifully written tanka, my friend... kudos! Thanks for sharing!
Tsiluma Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 1:42 AM
NICELY done Joseph! Love the imagery!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 12:45 AM
GREAT tanka, Joseph. One of the best of ones I have seen about tears and sadness!!!
Rahim Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 4:50 PM
very deep tanka, well done.
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