Tears

M	eandering through a maze of feelings
Y	ou wash,cleansing as you sweep them afar


T 	raveling through the ducts you come cascading
E	ach crystalline drop glistening and warm
A	llowing release to ragged nerves and emotions	
R	eleasing pain or irrepressible joy and 
S	oftly and silently you flood your gates and appease

~*~
By Annalise
For: H.G. Harvey "A Tear Personification", Contest.

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 7:14:00 AM

Anne congrats on you fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:34:00 PM

Annalise, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA

John Posey

Date: 7/21/2013 5:48:00 PM

Just a quick look convinces me that this is not your first poem.... Great acrostic talent is apparent here... Congratulations on your win.... Jake

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/21/2013 1:25:00 PM

Well done with winning Anne's contest, Annelise. Nothing like a good cry to cleanse the soul. Nice write, my friend. Licia :-)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/21/2013 12:53:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful Annalise! Congratulations on your win in the contest ;) love Wilma - hope your weekend is a good one!

Donald Reith

Date: 7/8/2012 6:59:00 AM

Very elegant and beautiful! I really like Tears! Look forward to reading more! Thanks Annalise.

Clay Robbins

Date: 12/3/2011 10:49:00 PM

Thank you Annalise for your thoughtful words; I am pleased to respond in kind. See my comment below... (:D)) cr

Clay Robbins

Date: 12/3/2011 10:39:00 PM

I was drawn to click an' open to read many of your poems and I have enjoyed the imagery that you do bring us in words at times whimsical & on another topic pangs of heartfelt desire & or saddness personified in poignant prose. "Tears" speaks to my present state of being. I take comfort in my humanity when some story I've found releases my pain & irrepressible joy opens the flood gates & through the ducts cascading crystalline tears filled with raw emotion all too human cometh to warm my cheeks.

Audrey Haick
Date: 12/4/2011 1:54:00 PM

Clay, It is I who should be thanking you for your very kind comments on my poems. You must...Soup mail! Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Annalise. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2011 4:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/22/2011 12:34:00 PM

Hey there Annalise, congratulations on your win in HG's contest, love Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2011 12:01:00 PM

Great to see you in the winner's list, Annalise. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2011 10:59:00 AM

Nice Acrostic.Congrats Annalise on your win--kash

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2011 8:02:00 AM

I love the original acrostic expression of a tear!! Well done, Annalise...and many many thanks for your kindness and thoughtfully sweet comments! They mean so much to me. Happy Easter to you too !!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2011 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2011 4:29:00 AM

Congrats Annalise on another beautiful win in HG's contest on tears... such lovely expressive emotion to win a top spot so well deserved my friend.. enjoy with luv...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/21/2011 9:55:00 PM

An amazing acrostc Anna. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/21/2011 9:50:00 PM

Dear Annalise, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 5th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry ( HG )