Tears

Emotions wet trail
Of laughter or grief, often
A mixture of both.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 7:27 PM
A nice haiku with good images
Gorelick Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 11:47 AM
High marks for this one! would you consider it a senryu? Lovely ..BG
Devonshire Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Indeed they can be a mixture of both, Paul. Very well stated haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn
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