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Tears

Her melody feel's like eternity Her weakness empower's my fears Though the world seems outstanding But her tears overfills the ocean Her breath fille the sky above us. Her narration of the world seems unique The unsatisfied quest for success seems dark The beauty of her soul light's up her pain Her sorrow of yesterday oversees her failure Her flaw's empowers her progress. Her value accumulates the pattern of my life Her vision brings out our ambition The tears of her heart melts my feeling's Her knowledge gives life to my destiny Nevertheless,she's my royal queen.

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Gry Christensen

Date: 9/29/2024 4:44:00 PM

First I found this unique poem rather sad, then as I continued to read the stanzas it's a really nice praise to a woman who obviously is loved and very precious. Thank you for posting this uplifting poem!

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/17/2024 4:55:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.