Tears

Her melody feel's like eternity 
Her weakness empower's my fears
Though the world seems outstanding 
But her tears overfills the ocean
Her breath fille the sky above us.

Her narration of the world seems unique
The unsatisfied quest for success seems dark
The beauty of her soul light's up her pain 
Her sorrow of yesterday oversees her failure
Her flaw's empowers her progress.

Her value accumulates the pattern of my life
Her vision brings out our ambition 
The tears of her heart melts my feeling's 
Her knowledge gives life to my destiny
Nevertheless,she's my royal queen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Christensen Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 4:44 PM
First I found this unique poem rather sad, then as I continued to read the stanzas it's a really nice praise to a woman who obviously is loved and very precious. Thank you for posting this uplifting poem!
Agustin Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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