Tears

Tears they fall for many a reason What ever the cause, whatever the season Its when they happen, its when their met Ours ducts are oh so deeply set. Trauma, laughter can make them show Some rain down, some take time to flow They all show feelings, whatever the case But they flow for reasons, its a tears place. The ones that fall to the ground Are they wasted we have no founds I think the ones, that fall and part Once they hit, they turn into Hearts http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/12/2015 8:48:00 PM

James, I thank God there are tears... :),the last line a wow!! and yes tears a fountain of feelings varying from grief to joy to excitement to contentment... ~olive eloisa xxx

James Fraser
Date: 5/13/2015 3:08:00 PM

I like this poem Olive, and yes, I love the last line I've penned, it's lovely I think. Hugs of warmth always, James xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2009 4:45:00 PM

God has those tears in a bottle. He knows when we cry. Nicely done. A different way to write about pain and hurt. Keep writing. Sara

Anna Andersen

Date: 5/29/2009 12:15:00 PM

i think your poem is better. i wrote mine when i was 14. so i knew it wouldn't be THAT good. lol but you are a very good poet. and you have so many of them. oh and about the other poem mom and dad.. your going to laugh, i wrote that for extra credit in 9th grade for English.