Tears

she cannot smile her cold feet are bare who will cry for this child 10-18-19 Contest: Get In Touch With Your Zen Sponsor: Richard Lamourex

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 2:47:00 PM

Sad but true, congratulations on your win x

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/3/2019 7:34:00 AM

I’m glad you took up the challenge. Do drop by for a visit. ;0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 7:50:00 PM

a sadly realistic one. Congrats on the win

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea..congrats on your win also!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/1/2019 7:05:00 PM

A poem for all era's, congratulations, deserving of a high placing in the contest.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thank you, sir!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2019 2:23:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Larry :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thank you!!

David Drowley

Date: 11/1/2019 2:04:00 PM

'Larry, Congratulations on your win! Nicely understated compassion. David'

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thanks, David !

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2019 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Larry :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 11/1/2019 10:22:00 AM

a sad piece of zen...congrats on your win with this humble question.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jeanne

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2019 8:56:00 AM

That’s a key point. When someone does not smile, especially a child and oh the woe in the eyes. Congratulations!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2019 8:41:00 AM

Congrats on top place In my contest. ;0) thanksfor entering my contest.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2019 9:12:00 PM

Thank you, Richard! That's a challenging and interesting format!