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Tearing Me Apart

Back and forth, not sure what to do. I love you, I really do. There's something, tearing me apart. She loves you, just as I do. Here it is, the tie breaker. The decision is yours. Who do you love more?

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Anthony Amero

Date: 4/20/2010 7:15:00 PM

Love hurts, doesn't it? It is tough to know what to do sometimes ... well, most of the time. Deep write. Thank you for the kind words on Dark Haired Beauty. Can I tell you a secret? I wrote that to no one. Just imagined someone with dark hair and wrote it. Imagined I had someone to feel that for. Anyway, thanks for sharing this and for the kudos. Tony