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Tearful Wound

Soft specks of red blood Fall from my swift dying heart Stressful feel explored I walk through space interweaved Till my eyes see no more views I falter some more No more fresh steps I will take With this wound pounding Tearing my life so apart I fall, tears no longer roll Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2012 4:45:00 PM

Sounds like death is coming! Good tone of impending doom, my friend.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/21/2012 11:13:00 AM

wow, powerful write indeed, Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2012 8:33:00 AM

the wrenching tone and experiential approach of this expressive gift is a supremely human experience, russell... what a way to end this with a thud... excellent!..:) huggs!

Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/20/2012 10:05:00 PM

Oh wow powerful little write, so sad sending much love to you :)

Don Johnson

Date: 7/20/2012 7:19:00 PM

the emptiness imparts, soft pulsing of the heart, is no more...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2012 3:21:00 PM

That is a very serious hurt that your heart is carrying there..Of course, just a write about the topic...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment..Yes, some men never learn or want to learn about the woman in their life..Sara

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/20/2012 2:33:00 PM

Gosh, Russell, she must have really been something !