Tearful Moment

she cries in pain
tears blot her face
rolling
                                          burning
                                                                                    hurting
her cheeks
she cries with heartache
reeling
                                           tolling
                                                                                    bleeding
her heart tears
up like her face
leading
                                           holding
                                                                                    leaving
marks upon her eyes
and her heart
seizing her soul
with…………..
lying
                                           crying
                                                                                    dying
blazoned blocks
of broken tears

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hopper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:46 AM
I'm honored that you would even comment on my poetry. You are so very talented! You are def a new fav!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Russell, my friend you have so vividly depicted her pain that it has become mine! Creative and imaginativ! Loved it!
Sands Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 9:11 AM
A very creative and expressive poem Russell. Excellent :)
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