Teardrops In Crushed Homes

hurricane ivan--
      broken trees and power lines
            teardrops in crushed homes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 3, 2011 at 5:28 PM
tears from devestation and having to start over, deep write, enjoyed this one Cathy,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 1:10 PM
This is very senryu, human emotion with the imagery of this tragedy. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 12:31 PM
realistic picture of the crushed homes well worded, Cathy
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February 3, 2011 at 9:30 AM
excellent haiku!
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