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snaps dismissed from chastity belt - red undergarment

2/5/2018
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Cook Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Date night :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Hmm
Barden Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 2:16 AM
Wonderfully whimsical, in a sexy way ... just loved it, Dear Friend! Congrats on well-deserved Poem of the Day!! Blessings, Kim! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Duet Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 1:51 AM
This is just great! I loved it...made me smile and almost lol. Anyway, congrats on POTD. You certainly deserve it. :D P.S. a FAV for me too!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Thanks,Carole!
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:58 PM
So creative,,,, love the poem..:) congratulations on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! xx
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Very witty(!)Is it hot in here?(lol) great monoku Kim;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Thanks, Keith!
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 12:49 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Kim
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Great one liner Kim.. Congrats on potd.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:11 PM
Thank you, Silent! :) K8m
Smith Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations Kim for POTD honors...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:11 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:56 AM
What a loaded poem!! As someone who loves to write them, let me say WOWSAS Kim, phenomenal job! Congrats on potd :) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:11 PM
I really apreciate your comment, Maureen! :) Kim
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Congrats on POTD Kim, Great Monoku.....Maria
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Maria!
Krampe Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Congrats on POTD, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you <3 Kim
Gondolf Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Nicely written, Kim, simple but sexy. Congrats on POTD!!! John
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, John!
Pett Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim, great monoku. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Congrats Kim, on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this great Monoku! Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 2:20 AM
I interpreted this differently from the others and see a person being sad about losing their virginity hence the rd undergarment. A thought provoking poem congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan x
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Jan! Yes, this poem can go in several directions.
Neumann Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Who snapped the belt? What does the garment say? Nice one liner...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:46 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Hauser  Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Lol!
Neumann Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 1:36 AM
Lots of love or lots of laughter?
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Gld to make you chuckle, dear Mike! ...your friend, Kim
Raynes Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 5:13 PM
ooo lala, nice write Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Lewis! Hugs...Kim
Talbot Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Mick Talbot Date: 2/5/2018 12:56:00 PM The time now: Haha, that's a very clever comment Kim, no negatives from me, fully charged, no that's not true? Mentally maybe, physically, well I'm going on 74, sorry I lied. In fun. Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 1:20 PM
I think I understand...well maybe...lol! See I love what others find in our poetry. Our muse is quite amusing! :)
Talbot Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:46 AM
A monoku comment:....... a late Christmas present... yeah... a red undergarment... that's a magnet............................................................. Just faved yours... Mick
Talbot Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Haha, that's a very clever comment Kim, no negatives from me, fully charged, no that's not true? Mentally maybe, physically, well I'm going on 74, sorry I lied. In fun. Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Can be taken different ways,Mick! Glad you found the positive.
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