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snaps dismissed from chastity belt - red undergarment

2/5/2018

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Date: 2/11/2018 12:21:00 PM
Date night :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:35:00 PM
Hmm
Date: 2/8/2018 2:16:00 AM
Wonderfully whimsical, in a sexy way ... just loved it, Dear Friend! Congrats on well-deserved Poem of the Day!! Blessings, Kim! :-) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Date: 2/8/2018 1:51:00 AM
This is just great! I loved it...made me smile and almost lol. Anyway, congrats on POTD. You certainly deserve it. :D P.S. a FAV for me too!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thanks,Carole!
Date: 2/7/2018 6:58:00 PM
So creative,,,, love the poem..:) congratulations on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 8:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! xx
Date: 2/7/2018 4:43:00 PM
Very witty(!)Is it hot in here?(lol) great monoku Kim;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thanks, Keith!
Date: 2/7/2018 12:49:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Kim
Date: 2/7/2018 12:10:00 PM
Great one liner Kim.. Congrats on potd.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! :) K8m
Date: 2/7/2018 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations Kim for POTD honors...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 2/7/2018 7:56:00 AM
What a loaded poem!! As someone who loves to write them, let me say WOWSAS Kim, phenomenal job! Congrats on potd :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
I really apreciate your comment, Maureen! :) Kim
Date: 2/7/2018 7:33:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Kim, Great Monoku.....Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Maria!
Date: 2/7/2018 6:58:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you <3 Kim
Date: 2/7/2018 6:40:00 AM
Nicely written, Kim, simple but sexy. Congrats on POTD!!! John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 2/7/2018 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim, great monoku. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Date: 2/7/2018 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Kim, on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 2/7/2018 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this great Monoku! Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 2/7/2018 2:20:00 AM
I interpreted this differently from the others and see a person being sad about losing their virginity hence the rd undergarment. A thought provoking poem congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! Yes, this poem can go in several directions.
Date: 2/7/2018 1:35:00 AM
Who snapped the belt? What does the garment say? Nice one liner...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 6:46:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 2/6/2018 8:20:00 AM
Lol!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/7/2018 1:36:00 AM
Lots of love or lots of laughter?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2018 11:51:00 AM
Gld to make you chuckle, dear Mike! ...your friend, Kim
Date: 2/5/2018 5:13:00 PM
ooo lala, nice write Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis! Hugs...Kim
Date: 2/5/2018 1:02:00 PM
Mick Talbot Date: 2/5/2018 12:56:00 PM The time now: Haha, that's a very clever comment Kim, no negatives from me, fully charged, no that's not true? Mentally maybe, physically, well I'm going on 74, sorry I lied. In fun. Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 1:20:00 PM
I think I understand...well maybe...lol! See I love what others find in our poetry. Our muse is quite amusing! :)
Date: 2/5/2018 10:46:00 AM
A monoku comment:....... a late Christmas present... yeah... a red undergarment... that's a magnet............................................................. Just faved yours... Mick
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/5/2018 12:56:00 PM
Haha, that's a very clever comment Kim, no negatives from me, fully charged, no that's not true? Mentally maybe, physically, well I'm going on 74, sorry I lied. In fun. Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 10:53:00 AM
Can be taken different ways,Mick! Glad you found the positive.
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