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Teardrop

Every teardrop have a weight to it Sad or joy...they roll out ever so soundless but ever so heavy to my heart they are They don't come free fall on their own With reasons they escape their safety Sad or joy...they free fall and down they go to nothingness...forever gone Only to leaving streaks of wetness to remind their ever so temporary existence in hoping for you to notice they were ever so meaningful teardrops So please don't go playing with my heart for every teardrop that streak down heavily hurt more than you know Smile Akkina R Downing 1-29-17

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FJ Thomas

Date: 5/4/2018 6:56:00 AM

So much meaning; your beautiful words hold weight just as your teardrops Akkina.

Mike Reed

Date: 8/2/2017 4:52:00 AM

Akkina, Akkina, She's the one, who makes the poetry so much Fun! And Slender Smooth to the Eye's Trace, could there be a Special PLace? Mike Reed

Edward Mccall

Date: 5/11/2017 9:18:00 AM

A Very sad but beautiful and meaningful poem Kina. I myself have shed more than a tear through joy and sadness. into my favorites it goes.

Akkina Downing
Date: 5/11/2017 9:31:00 AM

You're so kind and I do appreciate it very much so... Hugs :)

Laken Smith

Date: 5/9/2017 9:59:00 PM

I am a firm believer that crying cleanses the soul. I was always told never to hold mine back because there is no shame in letting everything held back out. <3 bravo

Akkina Downing
Date: 5/9/2017 10:31:00 PM

True that :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/7/2017 1:18:00 PM

Why do we cry?...has evolution giving us tear ducts...or God has given them to us for a brief relief...non the less a most beautiful tearful verse...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing
Date: 2/7/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you WW, your name is very cool too very epic I think :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 2/5/2017 10:48:00 PM

Hello Kina, A very moving and quite meaningful free verse here on "Teardrop." Tears are all part of one's life, whether they be for happiness or sadness. They are what make all of us "human." Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Akkina Downing
Date: 2/7/2017 5:23:00 PM

Hi Gary, thanks for the visit and your beautiful comment. I always appreciate your comments :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/5/2017 8:49:00 AM

Interesting contemplative piece. Well expressed!

Akkina Downing
Date: 2/7/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Richard :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/3/2017 9:02:00 PM

We have all experienced tears. Jack Kerouac wrote that "it all ends in tears, anyway". Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Akkina Downing
Date: 2/3/2017 9:20:00 PM

Thank you Matthew, I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/31/2017 12:42:00 PM

Unfortunately we must all suffer through the bad which helps enjoy the good. I must confess, if you weren't already married, I would play with your heart and all of the rest of you, too:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/31/2017 1:45:00 PM

...and you are a dream come to:) Thank you for the smile and the hugs and kisses:)

Akkina Downing
Date: 1/31/2017 12:47:00 PM

Lol... you're funny guy Danny but thank you :) xoxo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/30/2017 8:24:00 PM

I was about to say heartfelt, I shall change that to a tear felt poem!

Akkina Downing
Date: 1/30/2017 8:39:00 PM

Thank you Arthur for your time and comment :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/30/2017 7:19:00 AM

Such a sad but truthful poem Akkina. It is true, each tear we cry has it's own story, either sadness of happiness. The happy ones are great, the sad ones not so much,

Akkina Downing
Date: 1/30/2017 10:34:00 AM

Yes they are... And thank you Chris for your time I appreciated it very much :) xoxo