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Teardrop

A doomed lifelessness sprung out of me
My body resided, candid eyed 
While my soul left, evaporated to escape 
In the form of a single tear shed.
Such dense, my eyes could not hold the weight
They dropped it to the floor
Falling to its fate in a graceless chase 
I could not see it reach its goal. 
I felt light, but with unattended vacancy
A gulf possible of collapsing; I looked down,
And there were pieces of myriad gold
Breaking off the teardrop,
Flecks of my croon, singing
They were fairies who rose up to me,
I saw in them a sense of misery--
My own staring back at me.
The fairies casted a spell of my unknown 
The magic perforated straight into me 
Something stirred-- deceit to emptiness 
Something that did not beg to break free 
Maybe a soul that was stable, in peace. 
I realised it was the answer to my plea, 
The weight laden drop was no more 
The single tear shed was a call for help 
It birthed fairies who availed to it.

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Date: 7/21/2024 4:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/10/2023 11:35:00 AM
A nicely crafted poem, Akanksha, congratulations on a well-deserved win
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/10/2023 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, for visiting and commenting
Date: 8/10/2023 9:12:00 AM
"Something stirred-- deceit to emptiness Something that did not beg to break free Maybe a soul that was stable, in peace" - Beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 8/10/2023 5:57:00 PM
Thank you very much:)

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