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Tearbowl-Eyes

dashed to pieces
on day of celebration.
shards of antiques
dishandled, cracked
and abused. pieces
of mother-daughter bond.

I can’t cry; tearbowl-eyes.
always collecting myself.
mom would say,
“Stop that, Kimmy…”

the glass shelf fell
couple days before
though Dad heard the crash
he didn’t glance at the curio

tea party event before the cock crows.
a royal wedding; mom with her daughters,
swag and fascinators, blossoming teacups
and saucers - great-grandma’s china

heart broken
in so many pieces

mom wanted me to have this collection
what would cause this eruption…

9/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Evans Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 11:48 AM
How sad ... you always want those treasures intact ... for sentimental reasons; but things happen... Hugs, Marilene
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 8:38 PM
Already over it. So many things are more important. Thanks. ~ hugs
Jayasankar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Oh so sad for such a treasure of collections to be broken...but sometimes it happens. ..loved this Kim... Hugs... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 10:31 AM
It does. Might be able to repair some.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Oh what a pity that you should lose such a collection of your dear mother. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 10:31 AM
I know…right?! Worse to lose mom ~ perspective
Cunningham Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 4:56 AM
So sorry to hear that happened Kim on what should have been a happy event. Things like that hold sentimental value and evoke happy memories. Dispite what happened your love for your Mom and her love for you remains intact, the bond never to be broken. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! I soldier up. What is most important isn’t material but it does evoke sadness. God bless!
Karmakar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Unique beautiful poetry and presentation. Best wishes. Regards, sk.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, Sanjay!
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