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Tear Drop

Light as a feather, sensing the wind passing fast And feeling free from everything at last Happiness and joy have found their way And in her soul they’ll forever stay The long trail of memories passing by Every word he said and every lie Everything that was hunting her was gone Leaving her spirit pure and as white as a swan All her emotions were confused To this big mix of feelings she wasn't used Should she laugh? Should she cry? Nothing matters anymore when you’re in the sky But now she’s had enough and wants to stop And it’s too late because she hit the ground like a tear drop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/4/2016 12:35:00 PM
ecelent poem
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:46:00 AM
And the tear drop, at dawn, buds into a flower. Beautiful...
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Date: 3/17/2014 1:14:00 PM
- A beautiful poem Sara, a pleasure to read - thank you - do not cry .... :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Dreamersis Poems
Date: 3/17/2014 1:26:00 PM
aaaw :') so glad to know that you liked it! looking forward to read some of yours;) and thank you for this lovely comment, it really means alot :*
Date: 3/16/2014 8:37:00 PM
Ps., "Sweet dreams *:*(* 'Beautiful Cinderella.'"
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Date: 3/16/2014 4:57:00 PM
lovely poem; enjoyed it. haven't seen you around :) // paul
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Date: 3/16/2014 4:41:00 PM
† Standing Aside Slightly Behind, Her Beauty, While We Gaze Into This, Mirror, Sweet Beautiful Sara ˜ Coaxing A Gentle Smile And She Knows She Is Beautiful! ˜ More Than This Priceless; As Kissing Her Hair And Loving Her *:*(* Just Like Her Holy Father In Heaven Does....Welcome, Lovely Sara, Unto Her Loving's PoetrySoup ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John
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Dreamersis Poems
Date: 3/17/2014 1:48:00 PM
john! very touching and heartwarming comment! thank youuu :)
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 3/16/2014 4:51:00 PM
*)(*\

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