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Tear and Share

Tear and share But I don't care If you are not even here As I like my garlic bread Better than anything you once said Share not tear though Is what I said As it's better than eating garlic bread All alone wondering why You never left me any french fries! DAMO x

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/6/2019 2:06:00 PM

Hello Demo, I love garlic bread. French fried i like to. I would leave you some french fries and some garlic bread. Have a nic e day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2019 8:51:00 AM

Hello Damo,you did well with this poem you created. We all get better with the more we create our poetry. I think that you have done very well. have a nice day my friend.

Damian Keady
Date: 10/6/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Darlene.. your feedback on my scribbles is very much appreciated by me... I can't critique your poems as they all have such positive reviews.. am I am still learning to make a worthy poem.. all the very best.. DAMO