Damian Keady Poet Free verse

Tear and Share

Tear and share
But I don't care
If you are not even here
As I like my garlic bread
Better than anything you once said

Share not tear though 
Is what I said
As it's better than eating garlic bread
All alone wondering why

You never left me any french fries!

DAMO x

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Darlene De Beaulieu October 6, 2019 at 2:06 PM Hello Demo, I love garlic bread. French fried i like to. I would leave you some french fries and some garlic bread. Have a nic e day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 7, 2019 at 8:51 AM Hello Damo,you did well with this poem you created. We all get better with the more we create our poetry. I think that you have done very well. have a nice day my friend. Damian Keady October 6, 2019 at 4:40 PM Thank you Darlene.. your feedback on my scribbles is very much appreciated by me... I can't critique your poems as they all have such positive reviews.. am I am still learning to make a worthy poem.. all the very best.. DAMO