Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Teamwork

       Ornery welcomed
          Persnickety aboard 
       Stubborn manned the wheel

       Mischief infiltrated
          Nooks and crannies  
     
        Teamwork sank
          ~ the ship piecemeal

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Jerry Brotherton March 11, 2025 at 3:13 PM What a fun read, my friend. Sounds like a normal night at my house when I was a kid...one of fifteen I might add. Gershon Wolf March 11, 2025 at 7:15 PM Heh, heh. Fifteen! That's 15 of everything. Whoa.

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2025 at 9:28 AM I enjoyed reading your fun write. There is Teamwork and then there is Teamwork. Hope you can swim. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day as you write or is that swimming away.......... Gershon Wolf March 11, 2025 at 7:16 PM I hope I can swim too. Never tried it... lol.

Oliver Mckeithan March 11, 2025 at 6:47 AM Good one and so true in what you say with wit and humor Gershon Wolf March 11, 2025 at 7:17 PM Doin' my level best, Oliver. Thanks.

Michael Tor March 10, 2025 at 10:42 PM Enjoyed this comical write Gershon fun to read... Gershon Wolf March 11, 2025 at 7:18 PM It belongs in a 'comic book' probably...