Teamwork

Ornery welcomed Persnickety aboard Stubborn manned the wheel Mischief infiltrated Nooks and crannies Teamwork sank ~ the ship piecemeal

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/11/2025 3:13:00 PM

What a fun read, my friend. Sounds like a normal night at my house when I was a kid...one of fifteen I might add.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:15:00 PM

Heh, heh. Fifteen! That's 15 of everything. Whoa.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2025 9:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. There is Teamwork and then there is Teamwork. Hope you can swim. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day as you write or is that swimming away..........

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:16:00 PM

I hope I can swim too. Never tried it... lol.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/11/2025 6:47:00 AM

Good one and so true in what you say with wit and humor

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:17:00 PM

Doin' my level best, Oliver. Thanks.

Michael Tor

Date: 3/10/2025 10:42:00 PM

Enjoyed this comical write Gershon fun to read...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:18:00 PM

It belongs in a 'comic book' probably...