Notes About The Poem

Tea Time


    I said to Abigail Dolly, "will you have tea, dear heart?"
    Of course, she always said yes, oh fond the memory;
    And on my record player, I played a record of Mozart,
    Some days, Kitty came and that made tea for three,

    Long ago,
                  with cookies a la carte.

     On the shaded porch of my peaceful neighborhood,
    "Oh, did you say something, Abigail Dolly, pardon me!"
     Father had made me a little tea table of solid wood,

                Dappled the hues of my childhood.

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October 30, 2015

Narrative (Rhyme)

Written by Broken Wings

For the contest, Oil Painting 1-2-3, sponsor, Eve Roper

Note: Thank you Eve for letting me use your beautiful painting as inspiration

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Spagnola Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Oh, what a happy young, imaginative, and loved girl you pen! Congratulations..:), jill
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Jill for the nice comment and the congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:17 AM
One of my favorites, congratulations Constance.
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Richard that is so nice to say, thanks for the congratulations
Y. Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:49 AM
BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations
A  Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Broken, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Thank you
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Congrats Broken Wings!! :) Wonderful write!
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, appreciate ~
Negron Flores Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Nayda, Thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) Hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Jan, thanks so much for the congrats ~
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Absolutely charming broken Wings -Isn't it such a delightful image Eve has used to inspire us - she is so so talented ... I will be round for tea later:-) good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Afternoon tea with some soupers would be super! I could bake some of my lovely scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Jan, Eve's paintings are so beautiful and that particular one could have been painted just for me, love it and I hope my poem honors her art, thanks for the nice comment and yes come for tea, dear heart anytime ~
Tidd Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Poem's a-steeping, words steaming in the teapot, remember sugar.
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Jim, the tea is ready, thanks for the visit, hope you come back for a cup of words ~
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