Tea Time

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16 June 2025, For ABECEDERADIAN IN FIVE Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

tea time

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Luscious teacakes twirl in white coats, Meringues do zumba rumba Naughty nibbles dance bub-to-bub Orange pekoe snugs the cosy Petite posies ring-a-rosie

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2025 10:02:00 AM

What a charming poem John, it sounds like a delightful party i would love a cup of orange Pekoe tea and enjoy a dancing meringue lif i could catch it that is lol:-) hugs jan xx

John Anderson
Date: 6/11/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan - I'm a big fan of Alice and Peter Pan as well!

Karen Jones

Date: 6/10/2025 9:51:00 PM

Well done! I just couldn’t be limited to 5 lines. Best wishes!

John Anderson
Date: 6/10/2025 10:35:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Cheers

John Anderson
Date: 6/10/2025 9:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Cheers