T.A.U.R.U.S

Thundering Across the sky
Almighty against all others
Unleashing his power
Reckless among the heavens
Unbelievably
Strong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 1:08 PM
im a taurus--and this is so true--charma:)can be unbeliavably weak too
Lopez Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 2:14 PM
Savannah, congrats in placing in the contest.
Moreno Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Savannah, congrats on your success in Danielle's contest...Raul
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on placing Danielle's contest. Your poem is strong and interesting. Love, Dane
Esquire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Dear Savannah,Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Danielle White's Acrostic Contest A well deserved Win ALWAYS...HG
Winter Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 1:59 PM
I should have been born under this sign. Awesome! Congrats on your win! Love, Shar
Curcio Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Congrats on your win
Richards Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Well done, and well deserving our congratulations!! Power packed poem! ~ Carrie
Malone Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 2:41 AM
Reckless among the heavens...such a good line!
Yarnell Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 11:52 AM
such a strong poem.......................................................
Sheart Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 4:31 PM
This is the second Taurus poem today. I love it because I'm taurus. Good write hun. Either way it's a winner, if you're entering this in the contest good luck! Blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
P. Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 10:42 PM
i would like to agree on strength.. but my lill brother.. who is TAURUS is SO skinny and bony! so 'unbelievably strong'.. that would be an exaggeration!! no i just kidding your acrostic is fun and made me smile because my brother is just nothing strong!! but he is very cute... and thundering across the sky is just his way of maing an entrance! anyway, take care, Savannah! ~ Arany
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Taurus is a powerful sign, Savannah, and you have captured its spirit!
Moreno Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Wow, that is excellent. An illustrated piece nicely penned. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
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