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Tattered Wings

Battered silhouettes, Soar across a cloudless sky: Migrating sorrows.

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Richard Pickett

Date: 4/10/2010 7:56:00 AM

Nice write Raul. I see where Char got her inspiration....God Bless...Taz

Brian Strand

Date: 4/10/2010 12:00:00 AM

Thank you for your valued honour Raul.Your inspiring pictures are a welcome addition to our inspiration in this workshop atmosphere.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian Like the last lin of this haiku.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2010 10:27:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Fine images

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 3:20:00 PM

Wonderful words for your photo Raul and thankxxx for an exciting contest... although "Flight" was not chosen I enjoyed creating something new for this challenge... appreciate the opportunity to participate in your masterful contests...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 2:25:00 PM

wow, Raul, you really captured the spirit of your picture and this is a stunning final line. Can't wait to see my placement in your contest. I am really worried about not seeing the blogs and wondering if it's just me having the problem. Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 11:52:00 AM

This photo has generated many fine interpretations and wonderful poems. Indeed, this would have made an excellent entry for your contest. Lead on by your example, Raul. Well done! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2010 11:33:00 AM

Heartfelt Haiku to our fellow inhabitants Raul. I sat for ages staring at the pic you posted " Tattered Wings " the foundations of many of my poems are music related. To most on the Soup, the tracks i use will probably never ever be heard by 99% of the Soup. The foundation for my entry was " Murder in the Skies " by Gary Moore > called " The Russians have shot down, a plane on its way to Korea " - Murder in the Skies. Thank you for this honour, so much appreciated >> James

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/9/2010 11:25:00 AM

Oh wow...this would have won your own contest!! A great picture to work from, and once again, thank you for sponsoring this haiku challenge and for placing my poem! You are the king of haiku, Raul!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/9/2010 11:17:00 AM

this haiku's really amazing, Raul, especially liked your 3rd line and thank you very much for my placement in your contest, really happy I was able to enter at the very last minute! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 11:14:00 AM

Great write that you have here...It was a beautiful Cobalt Blue sky day...Thanks for the comment on my work and the honor of placing in your contest. Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara