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Tattered

I flap, remembered through treacherous gusts: freedom dismembered by old bloodline trusts assuring collapse with floods of treaties prompting a relapse of diabetes bursting the synapse in chemical sway, tightening those bootstraps till trust fades away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 4:33:00 PM
diabetes is an evil, non forgiving destructive force to be reckoned with.
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:54:00 AM
Intesting thoughts that you have penned in this one.. Could go several ways in the interpertation in this one..Sara
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