Tater Tot

i have little tater tot til it talks crap and gets shot i eat it then get really sad and then comes back and beats te crap out of me because it's mad so i went and got drunk at a bar and when i left i got hit by a car and then i got up to run it was clear he wasn't done he came and beat me with a bat and then got up and got mauled by a cat and as i was laying there half alive i seen my tater tot and started to cry and them i ate it then it died a and then i went home to my wife im glad that tater tot is out of my life

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/20/2015 11:32:00 PM

Hi Diet, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2015 9:44:00 PM

LOL, glad you are glad. Some tater tot's are bad for us. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 9:15:00 AM

Diet Water,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT