Tata, Sugar

She's done with her favorite sweets, Pies and Lattes.
Now health-conscious, she burns calories with Pilates.


Date written: 04/04/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Radhakrishna Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 3:20 AM
True! Sugar is wonderful but misused, overused!! I cannot have my tea without a spoon of sugar! Coffee with sweeteners! Good one Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Thank you so much, Krish:-)
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Lovely lines and perfect title, Edward ~
Ibeh Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 2:21 AM
Thank you very much, Line:-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:23 PM
oh what a perfect couplet. so cute.
Ibeh Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Blessings, xoxo
Hankins Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Nice couplet, Edward. But...does she still indulge...you know, occasionally?
Ibeh Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Oh, I'm sure she does, L.Milton:-) Nobody really quits sugar cold turkey forever!
Poet Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:43 AM
This is a really imaginative poem, which I read just when I was trying to avoid those foods and lose some weight. Have a blessed day and happy Easter Edward
Ibeh Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Thanks very much, Lasaab! Eat your sweets, but do so in moderation:-) Have a blessed, happy Easter as well, my friend.
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