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Tata, Sugar

She's done with her favorite sweets, Pies and Lattes. Now health-conscious, she burns calories with Pilates. Date written: 04/04/2021

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/11/2021 3:20:00 AM

True! Sugar is wonderful but misused, overused!! I cannot have my tea without a spoon of sugar! Coffee with sweeteners! Good one Edward!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/11/2021 6:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Krish:-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/7/2021 8:42:00 PM

Lovely lines and perfect title, Edward ~

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2021 2:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, Line:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2021 3:23:00 PM

oh what a perfect couplet. so cute.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/6/2021 8:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Blessings, xoxo

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/4/2021 9:27:00 AM

Nice couplet, Edward. But...does she still indulge...you know, occasionally?

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/4/2021 11:08:00 AM

Oh, I'm sure she does, L.Milton:-) Nobody really quits sugar cold turkey forever!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/4/2021 7:43:00 AM

This is a really imaginative poem, which I read just when I was trying to avoid those foods and lose some weight. Have a blessed day and happy Easter Edward

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/4/2021 7:46:00 AM

Thanks very much, Lasaab! Eat your sweets, but do so in moderation:-) Have a blessed, happy Easter as well, my friend.