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Tasting Desertion

I can taste
Words you haven't yet spoken,
Violent betrayals preordained
To ooze over my blistered throat.
Broken promises,
Pinkies entwined 
While future fingers fade.
I can taste
Jokes you haven't yet told,
Our precious snapshots
Aired out for your friends.
Cackling hyenas,
Jackals tearing moments
She and I both revered.
Her poetry makes you laugh now;
I can only imagine
How mine will.
I can taste
A relationship you haven't yet ended,
The final echoes of sanity,
"Where's the old you,"
Bated breaths being eaten alive-
Sucked into the maw
Of all the darkness
I can taste.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Oh, how I've been there, Carissa - beautiful write, and congrats on your win! :-) <3
Ashley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations Carissa on your win with this beautifully penned emotion write.
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July 7, 2017 at 5:44 PM
damn you are articulate! excellent job. makes me happy/sad.
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