Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Tasting a Raindrop

If I was a raindrop would I ever fall...
Maybe I would just blend in and stall...
 
I might drift around a sky or two for a ride...
And land softly on a tongue that can't hide...

My taste may have an artistic blend...
But an honest soul that would never bend...

Lean your head back when your in the pouring rain...
Just might be me fluttering above eyes that are the same...

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Debbie Duncan July 15, 2012 at 4:34 AM Awesome write,,, love it ;}

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 5, 2012 at 2:43 AM Spectacular IMAGERY !!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2012 at 9:41 PM of course I taste with pleasure Michael luv.. the elegance of your amazing words.. always brilliant to excite your JG ..forever and always.. we are over the rainbow.. forever .. and ever..xoxoxoxoxoxoxo luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 30, 2012 at 9:33 AM Hi soup xx

Wilma Neels May 30, 2012 at 6:10 AM Wow, why didn't I read this one yesterday while it was raining? hehe, enjoyed this MJF, got silly me smiling.. Hope you are having a great week :) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2012 at 5:08 PM Very cool. Such creative imagery you always use, Michael!! I am seeing lots of raindrop poems lately but not seeing a contest on raindrops. what am I missing?

Red Fiery May 29, 2012 at 12:15 AM Perfect words my dear friend...hope u remember me ..this was so beautifully written....cheeers !

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2012 at 10:44 PM Hello, Michael, how are you?? I love the image... you are a fine coach... he he ... this is very intriguing and cute... i love the rain.. thank you for sharing your awesome poem.. have yourself a good night, always :-) LINDA

Cindy Lu May 28, 2012 at 8:46 PM this time of year, the misty rain, that gently covers the woods, I can smell the purity, and the rain! love this aspect, it's differnet, appolgies for not reading earlier but so swamped and girls will have their day.......... so :) love to read you, you are one of my favorites, Cindy

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 28, 2012 at 8:04 PM Ahh, to be a magical raindrops...such a lovely write Michael! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Harry Horsman May 28, 2012 at 3:33 PM Oh boy, this is sheer Brilliance Michael, harry

Deborah Burch May 28, 2012 at 12:51 PM Totally Awsome, Michael!! I love it! :) hope all is well...missed ya, huggs, love ya, deb

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2012 at 9:27 AM If I were a snowflake, I would melt when I read this sweet poem Michael. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams May 28, 2012 at 9:27 AM Michael just love this, very cool buddy..David

Russell Sivey May 28, 2012 at 9:09 AM I believe this is one of the most artistic writes that I've ever read Michael! You did masterfully with this poem my friend! And I'm sure you would have an artistic taste to you if you were a raindrop! The talent you have is outstanding and shines! Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2012 at 8:35 AM Nice one. xx soup

Nette Onclaud May 28, 2012 at 8:16 AM hi, michael.. been a while.. a magical raindrop you would be!.. what tender energy this piece exudes.. :) huggs!