Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Taste of Paradise

A crystal clear transparent blue, with slow and steady waves.
A distant waterfall creates a misty hue, and shields a near-by cave.
lawn chairs scattered throughout the cove, umbrellas are drawn for shade.
Up yonder rests a coconut grove, where children run and play.



Jared Pickett
2005
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Edward Ford February 19, 2010 at 6:14 PM Nicely done Jared I can see it in my minds eye also thank you for your kind support

Nicole Sharon Brown January 22, 2010 at 4:53 AM These gives my mind an awesome view of nature what a beautiful picture painted with words!

Marty Owens January 20, 2010 at 6:27 AM When can I go there? And who all will be there? Love this poem...Marty

P Sheart January 19, 2010 at 2:43 PM Beautiful visual my friend what a beautiful landscape you paint here with words. Truly enjoyed. Love Light Patty Ps thanks for your most welcome comments. Love Light Patty

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2010 at 11:04 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poetry today Jared. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 19, 2010 at 12:35 AM This sounds like the Florida Panhandle area. A visit there is a taste of paradise, Jared. And it is just a beautiful as you have described in your peacefully wonderful poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix January 18, 2010 at 7:44 PM Another awesome poem, Jared! Beautiful images. Now, if you put there a loving couple, parents of some of the children, you'll have heaven. :) Thanks for sharing and again thank you for your nice comments on mine. Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 18, 2010 at 4:46 PM Sounds like Paradise to me ... beautiful imagery and very descriptive flow and rhyme.. my favorite.. rhyme... thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry tonight.. playing catch up tonight as best I can.. need to be at trial at 7:30 a.m. all this week.. till dismissed... what an experience... enjoyed this write ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno January 18, 2010 at 1:30 PM Excellent use of imagery and metaphor Jared...Raul