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This was written as a response to my sponsored contest Tarnished Reflections.  I rated it extremely high.....OH STOP....I'm only kidding.....I always write a poem when I select a Poetry Contest theme.  It was a very interesting batch of entries to the contest.

Hairline cracks of doubt slow mark the corners of mind’s vision, alter the illusion of yesterdays filtering into today’s. Soft gray film taints the sunshine halos, hardens the smiles, narrows the eyes as we squint into an abyss of angst. The shadows overlap, blend into complex inequities of truth tinged by time, of lies mocking the truth, piercing the solitude of age with the dagger of youth, clouding the beauty of tarnished reflections. John G. Lawless ©3/21/2018

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Date: 4/1/2018 9:24:00 PM
excellent write, John, . .. Hope you had a wonderful Easter...Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:48:00 PM
wow, give yourself a star. I'd place it super high in your contest if I had been the judge of tarnished REflections. Happy Easter Fools day from the "devious" one. Check out my blog. I was so surprised to find out the last time april fools and Easter were the same day!
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