Tarnished Reflections

We’re rightfully concerned
It seems to be a dark dubious world
We’re bringing you into
Threatening and not so promising
How long can we shelter you from it all
You’re tiny not even able to crawl
A babe not yet in school
Fastforwarding ten years
Can’t even imagine the so called progress
As it is, it’s hard to keep up
Everyone’s on a technology conveyor belt
Though a clever trompe l’oeil
We see veneer attempts to shrink
That gap between the have’s and the have not’s

Thank God
We are only grand-parents
Maybe age, fatigue or nostalgia
Gets the better of us
We seem to have lucked out
Growing up in the hippies era
Sure it had its problems but
It certainly was amazing
Everywhere mostly peace and love 
They were the golden years

Thinking back
Seems obvious that the magic element is 
Youth, innocence and naiveté


AP: 1st place 2020

Submitted on March 26, 2018 for contest TARNISHED REFLECTIONS sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/27/2018 3:50:00 AM
I would like to keep all of our children off of this conveyor belt, and teach them how to not be Stepford Wives or live an avatar's life, so this poem resonates with me in so many ways. Nicely put, and I love the little "dig" to automation too.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Keep plugging away at it, you are reaching so many kids with your kindness and wisdom... kids of all ages!
Date: 3/26/2018 9:45:00 PM
Interesting piece, Line...I personally feel the same way about that 'technology conveyor belt,' you so aptly and deftly named.... Here's to a brighter future, sans the darkness of Facebook and all the rest of that gunk. :) Gershon
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Date: 3/26/2018 10:34:00 PM
Blessed are those who live in ignorance of technology. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:51:00 PM
The morning tea attains more flavour as I finish reading this poem along with the sips ... Steeped in reality ... Perhaps a winner ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir. NAMASTE my friend. Enjoy your tea.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:31:00 PM
Lovely verse Line! So true..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Robertina.
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