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Tarnished Reflections

We’re rightfully concerned It seems to be a dark dubious world We’re bringing you into Threatening and not so promising How long can we shelter you from it all You’re tiny not even able to crawl A babe not yet in school Fastforwarding ten years Can’t even imagine the so called progress As it is, it’s hard to keep up Everyone’s on a technology conveyor belt Though a clever trompe l’oeil We see veneer attempts to shrink That gap between the have’s and the have not’s Thank God We are only grand-parents Maybe age, fatigue or nostalgia Gets the better of us We seem to have lucked out Growing up in the hippies era Sure it had its problems but It certainly was amazing Everywhere mostly peace and love They were the golden years Thinking back Seems obvious that the magic element is Youth, innocence and naiveté AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on March 26, 2018 for contest TARNISHED REFLECTIONS sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS

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Date: 3/27/2018 3:50:00 AM
I would like to keep all of our children off of this conveyor belt, and teach them how to not be Stepford Wives or live an avatar's life, so this poem resonates with me in so many ways. Nicely put, and I love the little "dig" to automation too.
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Date: 3/27/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Keep plugging away at it, you are reaching so many kids with your kindness and wisdom... kids of all ages!
Date: 3/26/2018 9:45:00 PM
Interesting piece, Line...I personally feel the same way about that 'technology conveyor belt,' you so aptly and deftly named.... Here's to a brighter future, sans the darkness of Facebook and all the rest of that gunk. :) Gershon
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Date: 3/26/2018 10:34:00 PM
Blessed are those who live in ignorance of technology. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:51:00 PM
The morning tea attains more flavour as I finish reading this poem along with the sips ... Steeped in reality ... Perhaps a winner ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir. NAMASTE my friend. Enjoy your tea.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:31:00 PM
Lovely verse Line! So true..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Robertina.

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