Tarnished Reflections

We’re rightfully concerned
It seems to be a dark dubious world we’re bringing you into
Threatening and not so promising

How long can we shelter you from it all
You’re tiny not even able to crawl
A babe not yet in school~ fastforwarding ten years

Can’t even imagine the so-called progress
As it is, it’s hard to keep up
Everyone’s on a technology conveyor belt

Though a clever trompe l’oeil
We see veneer attempts to shrink
That gap between the have’s and the have not’s

Thank God we’re only grand-parents
Maybe age, fatigue or nostalgia gets the better of us
We seem to have lucked out growing up in the hippies era

Sure it had its problems but it certainly was amazing
Everywhere mostly peace and love they were the golden years
Thinking back~ seems obvious that the magic element is
Youth, innocence and naiveté


AP: 1st place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 3:50 AM
I would like to keep all of our children off of this conveyor belt, and teach them how to not be Stepford Wives or live an avatar's life, so this poem resonates with me in so many ways. Nicely put, and I love the little "dig" to automation too.
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Keep plugging away at it, you are reaching so many kids with your kindness and wisdom... kids of all ages!
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Interesting piece, Line...I personally feel the same way about that 'technology conveyor belt,' you so aptly and deftly named.... Here's to a brighter future, sans the darkness of Facebook and all the rest of that gunk. :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Blessed are those who live in ignorance of technology. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.
Gupta Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:51 PM
The morning tea attains more flavour as I finish reading this poem along with the sips ... Steeped in reality ... Perhaps a winner ...
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Thank you so much, Probir. NAMASTE my friend. Enjoy your tea.
B. Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Lovely verse Line! So true..
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Robertina.
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