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Target Located

Your anger 
rains down on me 
like asteroids -
I prepare 
for impact


7/5/11

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Dinda Minardi

September 6, 2011 at 11:59 AM

Cool writing here, Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

September 2, 2011 at 12:51 PM

well, as I knew I would, I spent too much time here and didn't get in all my shoulder exercises for the morning. I have ten min. to dress and get myself out the door. haha. Movies await me!!

Andrea Dietrich

September 2, 2011 at 12:50 PM

LOVE this one, Susan. Great metaphorical senryu!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 1, 2011 at 9:38 AM

So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Susan. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol