Tapestry We Weave

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clouds float in a palette of rainbow rain whispers a rhapsody leaves sway in a trance stream murmurs a lullaby waterfalls descends on rocks heron glides in a slow motion breeze rustles a cadence chimes soar to horizon world is a tapestry of dreams we weave with imagination FIRST PLACE A Brian Strand 4 to 14 lines Poetry Contest July 24, 2021

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John Watt

Date: 7/29/2021 11:00:00 PM

Mala, a very lovely meditation on nature, dreams, solitude, and imagination. My favorite lines are "breeze rustles a cadence / chimes soar to horizon", though I just adore them all. Love the image too. Going in my faves ~ John

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2021 4:57:00 PM

Thanks, John. Really appreciate your inspiring words.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/27/2021 4:01:00 AM

Beautiful write

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2021 4:57:00 PM

Thanks, Rama. Appreciate.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/25/2021 10:41:00 AM

Such a beautiful verse with incredible imagery...and, as a plus, just the right illustration. Nice work, Malabika.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/25/2021 2:21:00 PM

Thanks, Milton. Appreciate your inspiring words.

Joseph May

Date: 7/25/2021 7:14:00 AM

A beautiful description woven by dreams, Very nicely penned Malabika

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/25/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. Appreciate your inspiring words.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/25/2021 5:34:00 AM

WOW! This is really beautiful. Much enjoyed the images you created, Mala. Superb throughout--especially the ending line.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/25/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. So glad you enjoyed the poem. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/24/2021 5:57:00 PM

I love the tapestry of beauty you create, with every word well placed comes the adoration of my heart. Thankyou for being part of my poetry world dear Mala. :)