Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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Tapestry We Weave

clouds float in a palette of rainbow 
                              rain whispers a rhapsody
                              leaves sway in a trance
                              stream murmurs a lullaby 
                              waterfalls descends on rocks
                              heron glides in a slow motion
                              breeze rustles a cadence
                              chimes soar to horizon 

           world is a tapestry of dreams we weave with imagination  


                                           FIRST  PLACE
                       A Brian Strand 4 to 14 lines Poetry Contest                      
                                           July 24, 2021

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John Watt July 29, 2021 at 11:00 PM Mala, a very lovely meditation on nature, dreams, solitude, and imagination. My favorite lines are "breeze rustles a cadence / chimes soar to horizon", though I just adore them all. Love the image too. Going in my faves ~ John Malabika Ray Choudhury July 31, 2021 at 4:57 PM Thanks, John. Really appreciate your inspiring words.

Rama Balasubramanian July 27, 2021 at 4:01 AM Beautiful write Malabika Ray Choudhury July 31, 2021 at 4:57 PM Thanks, Rama. Appreciate.

L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 10:41 AM Such a beautiful verse with incredible imagery...and, as a plus, just the right illustration. Nice work, Malabika. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 25, 2021 at 2:21 PM Thanks, Milton. Appreciate your inspiring words.

Joseph May July 25, 2021 at 7:14 AM A beautiful description woven by dreams, Very nicely penned Malabika Malabika Ray Choudhury July 25, 2021 at 7:53 AM Thanks, Joseph. Appreciate your inspiring words.

Vijay Pandit July 25, 2021 at 5:34 AM WOW! This is really beautiful. Much enjoyed the images you created, Mala. Superb throughout--especially the ending line. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 25, 2021 at 7:53 AM Thank you, Vijay. So glad you enjoyed the poem. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose July 24, 2021 at 5:57 PM I love the tapestry of beauty you create, with every word well placed comes the adoration of my heart. Thankyou for being part of my poetry world dear Mala. :)