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Tanning My Parts

Sittin' in the sun tanning my parts
Calm down girlies, viewing will soon start
Buck fifty an hour
Then need a shower
Free if I can join you and review your repetoire

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2018

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May 13, 2018 at 11:42 AM

Can I hear this song...but I prefer that one...the other part makes a lovely noise...Happy mother's day...All the best Jack

May 13, 2018 at 4:28 PM

Awww... Happy Mother's Day to you also, dear Arturo!!!

May 13, 2018 at 10:49 AM

I'm starting to change my mind about you Jack. lol I like your style!

May 13, 2018 at 4:32 PM

Oh oh... must be slipping out! LOL

May 13, 2018 at 10:02 AM

Plenty of sun cream on the sensitive areas, you don't want a cremated frankfurter.

May 13, 2018 at 4:33 PM

LOL!!! Thanks for the great advice Thomas!!!

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