Tanned

The moon bites the dust It rolls back Back into the heath Before the shame catches waves The little girl slips into her trench coat To catch her date It's clear in the skies As the magical sun slips through Beauty engulfs the world She has just stepped... into the garden of the falcons Tall and proud.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/26/2024 10:45:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.