Tanka the Form P
hanging from the trees
winter fog welcomes the dawn
and obscures the light--
cobwebs shimmer
necklaced to the hedge
NOTE:A tanka in English is essentially a 3 line hiku(SHOW)with a couplet amplification (TELL)
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