Tanka Poem

A leech sucked my blood
and I felt very dizzy
I needed some aid
someone said to take iron
in order to build my blood




Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 6, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Leeches are nasty and hurt when they come off. Great write...Raul
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