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TANKA III

little turkey pelt feathers fluff in wind--follows his drove through farmland he struggles to not fall back dust clouds rise beneath his feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/2/2025 7:12:00 PM
Such sympathy with and empathy for the poor 'little turkey pelt' you have created in a mere five lines. Bravo! :) Gershon
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Date: 1/2/2025 6:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about this delightful bird...
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:45:00 PM
Hmmm....interesting :)
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