TANKA III

little turkey pelt
feathers fluff in wind--follows
his drove through farmland
he struggles to not fall back
dust clouds rise beneath his feet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 7:12 PM
Such sympathy with and empathy for the poor 'little turkey pelt' you have created in a mere five lines. Bravo! :) Gershon
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Enjoyed reading about this delightful bird...
Hind Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Hmmm....interesting :)
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