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lone swan glides dark lake silver ripples mark her path quiet, still and deep reeds tremble in sympathy moonlight fades into gray dawn

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Date: 1/2/2025 7:10:00 PM
'reeds tremble in sympathy' - wonderful observation, Moon. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/2/2025 6:12:00 AM
Nicely written lovely theme Moon Harp...
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful! <3
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Date: 12/28/2024 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. I'm so glad you liked it.

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